徐匯區中考一模英語作文

2021-08-16 中考作文真題

　　假設你正在國外參加教育交流訪問活動，你需要做一個簡短的、讓人印象深刻的自我介紹。請寫一篇至少60個詞的發言稿介紹一下你自己(Danny)或者你的國家和學校(ABC school)

　　Ø 莎莎老師范文：

　　Self-Introduction

　　Ladies and gentlemen, it is my honor to participate in this education and exchange activity. My name is Danny, a student of China’s ABC school. As you can tell from my smile, I am an easy-going boy with a warm heart, ①who always tries his best to help friends or even strangers. ②If you ask me how I can be such a considerate student, I will tell you it is owing to the cultivation in China. ③As the old saying goes ‘a friend in need is a friend indeed’, we are taught to ④give a hand to those who are in trouble during our growth. ⑤What’s more, whether a student is willing to help others is one of the most essential evaluations in our school. ⑥It is these valuable traditions that shape me. ⑤In summary, I‘d like to thank you for this platform. of communication and hope you will feel the same enthusiasm next time when you come to China.

　　Ø 內容分析：

　　本文要求考生做一個令人印象深刻的自我介紹，所以切忌流水賬，比如直白地描寫性別、年齡、愛好等。我們需要找出自己性格特征中的亮點并結合國外交流活動這個場合進行介紹，如果能順便穿插中華文化、學校特色，則更能顯示自我介紹的國際性、推廣性。

　　Ø 精彩亮點分析：

　　亮點一: 非限制性定語從句是人物描寫的有利武器，可以將人物特征以形容詞、介詞短語后置和非限制性定語從句三種形式融匯到一句句子中。

　　亮點二：條件狀語從句，注意時態的主將從現。

　　亮點三：使用諺語增加文章語句多樣性，且該句承上啟下，開始由個人介紹過渡到學校、中國文化。

　　亮點四：巧用動詞詞組，“伸出援手”形象生動。

　　亮點五：連接詞句簡潔易懂，有遞進、有總結，使文章層次分明。

　　亮點六：用強調句加強語氣，使自我介紹更有說服力。