A letter to my classmate
Dear Miss zhang,
Thank you so much for the wonderful present you gave me for my birthday last Wednesday. It was nice of you to come and see me, and I was so surprised that you had bought me a present, which I enjoyed very much. I will probably hang it in my bedroom so that I can always see it!
It’s a weekend today, so I have some time to write some short letters enjoy my presents and start reading the book that my neighbor gave me.
How about you? Have you finished the book report for Mr. Gao? You told me last week you had started piano lessons. I would like to come over some time and hear you play.
Thanks again for the present and hope to see you soon.
Love,
Kathy Huang
請以“My Classmate”為標題寫一篇記敘文
要求：1、主題明確。語言流暢。思路清晰。 2、字數在100字以內。
思路點撥
寫記敘文要按照事物發展的客觀規律敘述，所敘述的內容要交代清楚，條理清晰，重點突出，主次分明，詳略得當。
這篇文章也是記敘文，主人公應該用第三人稱，時態以一般過去時為主。本文以主人公為中心線索，以一、兩件事件為重點內容去組織材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整個內容情節要合情合理，有真實感，敘述時可按事情發展的順序進行，同時加以點評。
參考范文一：我的同學(My Classmate)
Grace is one of my classmates. She is not good at study, though she usually works very hard. Maybe she just doesn’t find the learning method suitable for her. In my mind, she is clever. Thongh she is not good at study, she is popular in our class. In all people’s mind, she is kind and optimistic. Treating everyone as friend, she has no enemy. As she doesn’t study well, it is hard to avoid feeling sad. However, everytime she just feels sad for a while and then recovers for the first one. Sometimes it is her who comforts us for not for not doing well in the exam. Look, she is so cute!
格瑞斯是我的一個同學。她學習不好，雖然她平時非常努力學習。也許她只是沒有找到適合自己的學習方法而已。在我眼里，她是很聰明的。雖然她學習不好，但她在班里人緣很好。在所有人的眼里，她是友好，樂觀的。她對待每個人都像朋友一樣，所以她沒有敵人。因為學習不好，難免會感到悲傷。但是，每次她都只是難過一會，就第一個恢復了。有時候還是她安慰我們這些因為考試不好而難過的人。看，她是如此的可愛!
參考范文二：我的同學(My Classmate)
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others。
One day on his way to school， he saw a little girl crossing t he road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived， and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom， the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.
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