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Recently the government has shorten Labor Day Golden Week holiday and included some traditional holidays such as Mid-Autumn Festival. China Daily conducted a survey about it. Opinions are divided on this decision.
69% of the people involved in the survey are strongly in favor of the holiday proposal. There are many reasons for the adjustment of holidays because it is obvious that Labor Day Golden Week holiday contributes to many problems. Firstly, during Labor Day Golden Week holiday, ticket fees are overcharged. And tourists flood scenic spots, thus causing serious traffic jams. Secondly, shrinking the lengthy holiday is a most effective way to release the great pressure on traffic and tourist systems. Besides, it is well-known that Chinese traditional festivals are rich in content. So making them into holidays helps to carry on the Chinese civilization.
However, there are 31% against the shortening. They argue that Labor Day Golden Week holiday can promote the tourist industry and add fuel to the economic development/growth. Worse still, high frequency of holidays will affect the current production order.
In my opinion, Golden week holidays benefit people’s lives, make people feel refreshed and also promote domestic consumption. Meanwhile, Chinese festival holidays help to preserve Chinese traditional civilization. All in all, more holidays are always welcome.
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